Thursday, November 7, 2013

The Star Gate


One day there was an old man, who looks like he was in 90s and slightly bent, walking in a small but amazing park.
Then he went to sit on a bench to look at the pond with stone at the bottom of the pond. He said oh it a lovely day today, but then out of the blue a stone circle with some sort of writing on it came out of the water and he said A STAR GATE so he jumped through it and landed in stone and died.
25 YEARS LATER at the same park, there was a boy was with his sister and the both said oh it a lovely day today but then a stone circle with some sort of writing on it came out of the water.   

By Karl

1 comment:

  1. What an interesting story, Karl. I love that you included the jump in time. That was very creative. Keep up the great storytelling. Mrs. Politowski Team 100WC

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