Everything went black after I said
good-bye to my friend. All I remember is that it was cold and
that I was running, no idea as to where I was going but something, not
someone, something was chasing me. Everything was a little fuzzy and spinning
around, but that was probably just the booze. I started slowing down when I
thought I’d lost the thing, then I heard a monstrous growl far from human and
started running again. I started to hear thudding not far behind me, so I
gained speed. I came up to a gateway and then…
By Natalie
I wonder what happened next! Great writing. I really like how you describe what the person can hear. I like the phrases "the thing" and "monstrous growl". You've done a good job with your punctuation too, especially at the end.
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