Thursday, June 5, 2014

My friend



It was cold as I was running up the hill, I turned right and went through my gateway at my house. I got in just before it turned pitch black outside. I had a shower and when I got out I heard a noise. I looked down the stairs and saw it was my friend I told him I will be down there in a minute. I quickly got dressed and went down to meet him. We played heaps of games together then we went to bed.

By Joe
Posted by room5 at 9:08 PM

1 comment:

  1. Ms DW June 9, 2014 at 8:46 AM

    Jo

    Thank you for sharing that your story, I like the idea that you spend time with your friend.

    To improve you could try to use some more adventurous vocabulary.

    Well done, great job.

    Mrs DW Team 100

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