AHHHHHHH!
Everyone was looking up at the sky and screaming, so I decided that I should
probably look up and see what is up there. It was big, bigger than I have ever
seen, Its an asteroid. My job is to investigate strange things that come from
space. So I got in my car and started to drive in the direction that it was
going in then all of a sudden bang it had hit the ground and was sliding
towards me I quickly swerved to the side driving strait of the road. It stops
it looks like I’m the first to see it. The top was of it and some strange goo
was coming out.
By Isaac
nice poem Isaac
ReplyDeleteThis is an exciting and well written story. I like the way you used ' all of a sudden' and the repetition 'big, bigger than I've ever seen' made it really dramatic
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