Friday, June 6, 2014

The $5 note

One day after school I was walking home. And I saw a $5 note go flying past in the freezing COLD wind. I dashed after it I got lost I didn't know where I was anymore. Suddenly I saw the money go flying into a cave or something. I went RUNNING in after in and I couldn't see anything it was pitch BLACK. I suddenly hear a loud raw and a monster comes chasing after me. It chased me all the way to my GATEWAY. when my FRIEND  came running up and broke its neck. the end.

By Ryan

2 comments:

  1. You did a great job Ryan wit your Writing.

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  2. awesome story
    Ben.s r15

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