Thursday, June 12, 2014

5 Sentence Challenge - the market


Mum and dad are going to get some food at the market. Its busy and lots  of people are every where. Dad is going to get some beers and cheese and I will buy a toy and mum gets  the fish and the olives. And hollie buys the sauce from granny. I will buy the sweets at the village shop.

By Olivia
Posted by room5 at 8:19 AM

3 comments:

  1. Mrs Skinner (Team 100)June 14, 2014 at 8:28 AM

    Hello Olivia!
    Great sentences that tell me you are ready for 100WC! Have a go!

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  2. Mrs Skinner ( Team 100)June 15, 2014 at 4:34 AM

    What a lovely family outing Olivia! You have really used your sentences to describe a very busy scene. Well done!

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  3. Allana TJune 16, 2014 at 9:55 PM

    Great writing on the 5 Sentence Challenge Olivia. I like the way you have used different starts for each sentence.

    Challenge:
    Try using different connectives rather than using and twice in a sentence.
    Dad is going to get some beers along with cheese as I buy a toy, while mum gets the fish and olives.

    Allana (Teacher in New Zealand)
    http://springstonteamendeavour.blogspot.co.nz/

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