As princess candy floss walked through the forest
Singing to herself and dancing,
On the way she meet prince candy floss,
He had a serious face,
So princess candy floss came running over to him.
“What's wrong sugar,princess candy floss said,”
“CHOCOLATE MUD HAS CAUSED TROUBLE
IN BLUE GUM CITY HE HAS FLOODED THE CITY
WITH CHOCOLATE,”prince candy floss said shouting.
So prince candy floss called marshmallow the horse
to come.
Then princess candy floss heard a big thud behind her.
Marshmallow,came running fast”WOW that was quick
“Princess candy floss said.
Then prince candy floss hoped on
Marshmallow then lifted princess candy floss up to.
Princess candy floss and prince candy floss were on there way.
Chocolate mud was a bad villain he did all sorts
Of things he drowned my father king lollipop
And my mother queen floss.
But we will fight back.
Finally we got there prince bubble gum was fighting his
Banana knights but king blue gum and queen blue gum
Were locked in the room safe.
Then princess candy floss heard a high pitch voice scream it was princess blue gums scream and
Chocolate mud was about to grab her and take her
To his mansion to get the secret treasure and steal it
To take over the world.
Princess candy floss shot into action.
She ran and kicked him right in the shins and knocked him out.
I like your story because you described all you characters well and you described the scene.By Viana
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