The mother licks
her babies clean the four kittens names are moo, buttercup, moues and pippins
the girls stay with their mother but moo is on an adventure kitty and go off
his adventure he finds a big door will he go and leave his family yes he does
and finds him self high above the grass he falls down and gets him self stuck
in a hole. So he keep digging like pushing through the earth the pool he digs
up and pop his head to see the light sun on his face as he meows for his mom.
By Sarah
Hi Sarah,
ReplyDeleteI'm glad he got out of the hole! Make sure you use sentences so that your writing flows better and is easier to read. Also, is your choice of font and size of text the best option?
Keep up the good work,
Paul Huebl
Year 6 Teacher
Adelaide, Australia