As the lava starts pushing through the earth people flee there village and run to higher ground watching the lava floods through there village burning everything in its path.
The smoke fills the air with a toxic smell which makes everyone cough when they inhale it.As the unlucky people are burned the survivors looked in horror .As dark falls they have no food,no light and no shelter to sleep the night.When light shines through the eruptions had stopped the only place thad hade survived was the town hall.They have to rebuild their village which will take years.
By Kieron
Excellent job, Kieron! Your word choice is exceptionally strong and it makes your entry engaging and mysterious. I was captivated by your ideas, and the ending made me wonder what will happen next. I hope it's not as sad as it seems, but it's a powerful ending.
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