Once upon a time there lived
a girl
She was from whangarai she
had lots of family up there one day she was in her backyard digging and a chest
she kept
digging until she could get
it out and she found a videocalled pushing throught the earth she went inside
and hid it in her room until the morning it turnd eight pm so she had to go to
bed morning came she got up at seven o’clock she went and got the video and ran
down stairs pluged the tv in and put the video in …
by Temeka
Hi Temeka,
ReplyDeleteThank you for entering this week's 100 Word Challenge.
I'm curious to know what was on that video!
It is very important for all writers to edit their work. You need to read over your work again to see if it all makes sense. You also need to put in full stops at the end of your sentences.
Keep writing!
Mary @ Team 100 WC.