It
was such a nice honey-moon and Dan had been so sweet the whole time. On the
second day in France we went to a bridge in Avignon. It was nice and sunny but
I’d forgotten a hat so Dan bought me one from a stall. After I put it on, we
walked across the bridge, hand in hand, and we were just quietly talking and
laughing when Dan came to a stop. “What is it?” I asked. “Look in front of
you.” So I did. I hadn’t realised, because I’d been staring at Dan, that the
bridge had ended. Half way across the river.
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Hi Natalie. What a well told tale! You write very well and your well constructed sentences create a smooth narrative that many older writers would be proud of. Congratulations - this is very good! Mr Mullard Team 100 WC UK
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