Wednesday, September 10, 2014

Hamish


It came down like a meteor, and landed with a gigantic thud. Me and my friend went outside and saw a man he looked unconscious. “what happened” I cried “it’s a human” said peter “but it is yellow” The man got up we stepped back peter and was prepared to run he sat up and stared me in the eye his pupil was red as fire fading into an orange iris peter glanced at them and straight at first sight he ran to his house I stayed I was caught in his stare I couldn’t look  away I was trapped.      

1 comment:

  1. Lynda (eam 100WC) from Hartlepool, UK.September 16, 2014 at 6:46 AM

    This is an exciting story. I loved the description of the creature's eye and was dying to know what would happen next. I really enjoyed this. Well done.

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