Monday, September 15, 2014

Hamish


I was so excited when we boarded the plane to Avignon France I can just relax all holiday and it would be nice to take a break from school but of course I knew that we would be sightseeing and our first sight was half a bridge “why can’t we just cut a bridge In nz in half” I said no one listened. Then I saw people jumping of the end of the bridge I looked in the bag we had brought and saw the towels and spare clothes, I knew what I was about to do I stared down.   

1 comment:

  1. Hi Hamish, good work on this week's entry. Make sure that you proof read your work to make sure that it is grammatically correct - you also need to add punctuation. Mrs Parker

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