We
were just walking through the park hiding from the others. Hide and seek wasn’t
the most fun game to play at my best friend’s birthday party but when its pitch
black and at 12:00 in the morning. I was hiding with two of my other friends,
James and Mike. We found a good hiding spot under a tree next to the back
entrance then we heard a big boom and we looked up. Is it an asteroid I said,
maybe? But it’s yellow. BANG! Did it crash? I don’t know said James. we got up
and sore a big clouds of smoke pouring from the aria where it crashed.
Wednesday, September 10, 2014
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This is a good challenge just watch your spelling of "saw" and "area". Next time ask a friend to read over just to check your spelling.
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