It was a snowy winter day. The leafless trees formed around me like a barricade. The snow felt like a shield
protecting me. A train suddenly rushed past me, the headlights blinded me for a split second. I rubbed my eyes to try and regain my vision. Once I had my eyesight back. I saw a man in the distance. As I approached him a train went by it again blinded me for a split second. When I regained my vision back I looked where the man was standing and he wasn't there. I turned around and looked everywhere but he just wasn't there.
By Tia
Wednesday, July 23, 2014
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Great writing Tia I love the suspense! -justine (Sophie's mum)
ReplyDeleteGreat imagination - enjoyed reading your story:)
ReplyDeleteAngela
Great descriptive writing. It is easy to picture the scene and exciting not to know what happened to the man.
ReplyDeleteSheryl