Wednesday, February 13, 2013

g,day mate

This is Dylan and Xander and we are are learning about how to write something on our blog.
                                         This is a poem we made today.
                                     Xander  
                              Funny, annoying and silly
                               Son of Jay and Nadine
Who loves Mum, Dad and kyan 
Who feels silly at school
Who needs a house, a ps3 and a P.C.
Who gives toys and clothing to the salvation army
Who fears spiders, snakes and sharks
Who'd like to see a Great White
Who dreams of cage diving
A student of Broadgreen
        Xander

This is another poem we made today

Dylan Funny, silly and mischevious
Son of Leeanne and Dan
Who loves dogs,rabbit's and frogs
Who needs a house, a ps3 and a P.C.
Who gives money to the poor
Who fears spiders, zombie and ghost's
Who'd like to see Adam Sandler
Who dreams of playing ps3
A student of broadgreen
                            Dylan

7 comments:

  1. Hi Dylan,

    We enjoyed reading your poem. Well done!

    Room 15

    ReplyDelete
  2. hi it sounds like fun the things you do from Rhys and Will. :)

    ReplyDelete
  3. Hi Dylan i liked reading your story

    Kameran and Alec

    ReplyDelete
  4. funny good job J.T Z.J

    ReplyDelete
  5. Awesome poem!!!!!

    Hope to see more posts please!!!
    O.D

    ReplyDelete
  6. Great Job
    Hannah RM 15

    ReplyDelete
  7. Nice poem! creative!


    Leo

    ReplyDelete