Thursday, March 12, 2015

Fynn - the strange pet

One day a guy called Jeff decided he would go out for a walk whilst on his walk  he saw a lot of things one of them was a horse, whilst he was walking he was saying too himself, I must walk carefully or I might trip. Many people think Jeff is a strange because he has a pet pipe he thought it was a snake as he found it in a pond when he was on his last walk and decided he would fetch it out of the pond, he swam  out and rescued the so called snake which was in fact a pipe but never mind he thought I will pretend it is a pet.
 
 
By Fynn
Posted by room5 at 7:41 AM

2 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 13, 2015 at 5:10 AM

    Hello Fynn.
    you have a great piece of writing.
    There are a few mistakes, but other than that, it was really exciting.

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  2. AnonymousMarch 16, 2015 at 4:41 AM

    A great idea for a story Fynn. I wonder if you could think whether there is any punctuation you could use to help the reader?

    (Team 100wc)

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