By Kaitlyn.
Wednesday, March 18, 2015
Broadgreen Intermediate 2015
Tuesday, March 17, 2015
New Blog!!!
Hi everyone, since we are all getting so busy with our 100 word challenges, I thought I woudl create a different link for this - that way, our normal 'day to day' blogging will not get caught up in between such creative writing.
Take a look on the right of the screen, there is a new link called Room 11 100 word challenge/5 sentence challenge. This is where you will find all our fabulous work from now on :)
Mrs Parker
Take a look on the right of the screen, there is a new link called Room 11 100 word challenge/5 sentence challenge. This is where you will find all our fabulous work from now on :)
Mrs Parker
Friday, March 13, 2015
Chevawn - The Day My Fate Changed
I trot to the end of the road on my horse buster;
the sun carefully makes its way behind the
tall green hills. As me and Buster make it
back to the paddocks I hear a strange sound. ‘BEEEEEEES’ I screech in terror.
We interrupted there hive that lay on a pipe.
I loosen the reins and slightly kick buster until he bursts into a gallop. The swam of bees follow until we finally escape them.
The sun was shining when I woke up the next morning. I get changed into my
jodhpurs, boots and put on my helmet. I soon make my way through the lush grass
and horse manure when I see Buster standing there. I look in his eyes and can
tell he trusts me!
Chevawn
Tyler - The horse
One nice sunny evening my tail was wagging
eating delicous grass...Wait a minute u probably are confused i am a horse my
name is mike anyways back to the story i was eating grass but all of a sudden i
could smell something horrible at the minute i thought it was me but it was a
huge PIPE beside me. I peeked inside but a grumpy old farmer pushed me inside i
CAREFULLY SWAM down the GREEN water and found a room full of...nothing but
GREEN water and crocodiles lets go get out of here CAREFULLY i SWAM down the
GREEN water i went through heaps of PIPES until i found my way out.
By Tyler
Thursday, March 12, 2015
Erana - A busy day
It was a hot sunny day in nelson so i swam around the green mossy river.
After an hour or two i had to get out.
I slowly and carefully climbed up the rocks to the car.
We got home and i had to quickly get ready for horse riding.
hours past and my mum was late to pick me up.
she called me after fifteen minutes to say that a pipe in our house had broke.
i was sitting at the parking lot waiting for my mum to pick me up.
when she arrived i got into the car and went to sleep on the long drive home
Fynn - the strange pet
One day a guy called Jeff decided he would go out for a walk whilst on his walk he saw a lot of things one of them was a horse, whilst he was walking he was saying too himself, I must walk carefully or I might trip. Many people think Jeff is a strange because he has a pet pipe he thought it was a snake as he found it in a pond when he was on his last walk and decided he would fetch it out of the pond, he swam out and rescued the so called snake which was in fact a pipe but never mind he thought I will pretend it is a pet.By Fynn
Olivia - 5 s.c.
In the it smell forestie I can hear and see the monkeys go eek aah. Hear the snakes go ssssss and it scares me. I was waking in the jungle and the sticks are creeking. The birds were tweet tweet tweet tweet .
By Olivia
By Olivia
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