I think that endangered animals should be saved there are three reasons why I think that we need to save endangered species. Number one We need animals on planet. Number two we need to the food sources of these animals,and number three if we don't save these animals the food chain will possibly die out.
We need animals on planet earth
Animals are key to the environment, which means we need to save our endangered species. As this may lead to death, and a lot of it to. Which is why I think we need to save our endangered species
We may need the food sources of these animals
Food is another important thing. Food comes from animals plants and and even us humans to. As food comes from some certain animal we need to be careful of what we let die out.
And lastly the food chain
The food chain is a big looooong cycle that keeps us all alive. Which means if we let one animal die out there will be no food for it's predator which mean it's predator will eventually die out to. This process will keep going until we all die out which means we need to try and save our endangered species.
This is why I think we need to save our endangered animals. hopefully I have persuaded you to save endangered species to.
Your story was well organised into paragraphs that introduced three different points. y\Your introduction clearly stated all three points.
ReplyDeleteWell done
Zoe