Endangered animals should not be saved
There are many endangered animals around the world and while many people are trying to save them I believe they should not be saved.
Do you have a fear of the sea or should I say sharks? The possibility of being killed by a great white? Or any other animal for that matter? Well if we stop trying to save endangered animals the threats that many different species impose on us will be decreased. Therefore making the world a safer place for mankind.
Saving endangered animals is a waste of time. We could be saving a child from a burning building, saving someone from a deadly heart disease, making new discoveries and new inventions. But instead we waste our time putting time and effort into saving other animals that wouldn’t do the same for us.
We spend so much money trying to save these endangered animals when we could be using it to save our own species by helping the poor, ending world hunger and building houses. Making the world a better place.
I believe endangered animals should not be saved because it decreases threats, it’s a waste of time and a waste of money. Save humans not endangered animals.
Good story Ruby,
ReplyDeleteYou used a great opening statement and you used verbs to express your opinion.
~Amber T :)
you have lots of punctuation you used lots of emotive language but you went over and over about the same thing
ReplyDeleteGood opening paragraph I liked all the information in the text. Next time make a strong closing paragraph.
ReplyDeleteGood story Ruby,
ReplyDeleteYou used a great opening statement and you used verbs to express your opinion such as "believe"
~Amber T :)