In the changing room the nerves rush though my veins, I know we have to win this game as it is the final of the rugby world cup. We walk out onto the pitch, everyone is shouting GO ALL BLACKS!!! As the game starts we get the ball and set up a ruck. England sored at 72mins and they missed the conversion, 5-0, at this point I thought we were going to lose. But I got the ball and ran, I wanted to stay in the middle of the field but I had nowhere to go but the corner......... to be continued.
by baydn
Thursday, May 29, 2014
The Labyrinth
I awake to
find two narrow pathways leading to nothing but darkness. I fell around for a
light and stumble across a torch “welcome” says a voice “are you ready to enter
my labyrinth” “WHO ARE YOU” I ask “I’m the creator of the labyrinth now are you
ready to start” I nod this must be a dream any way I turn an my torch and look
both ways one is filled with spider webs the other is plain and dull I’ll take
that one I run down until see spike sitting in the walls I get cut this I know
dream!
By Hamish
But where could I go?
As I was walking home from school, someone pulled over in a grey van. A man asked if I I wanted to go a ride with him. As I said no he grabbed my hand. I punched him in the chest and ran. The car chased me. I cut through an alley and then panicked. But where could I go? I decided to find a safe spot to hide. As I pulled out my phone to call the police my Mum rang. I told her to pick me up. 5 minutes later she was there to save me!
Wednesday, May 28, 2014
Where could I go?
But where could I go? I wondered as I sprinted down the hallways, why did I have to pick this house to go trick or treating at? The ground suddenly slipped from under me as I crashed into the side of the hallway, I heard footsteps approaching slowly, the old house creaking slightly. I scurried back onto my feet, the footsteps getting closer.. Oh no.. I dived into a near by closet and closed the door quietly but quickly. My breathing began to become slower and Calmer I couldn't hear the footsteps any more and I decided to wait it out.
By Sophie
By Sophie
The holiday
One day i was sitting on the couch and mum came rushing through the door and said pack your bags were going on holiday ,1 hours later were off on holiday to , wait i can tell you because i don’t know where we are going cause mum hasn't told me yet i asked she said “Australia’’ i said “but where could i go first’’ mum said “anywhere’’ so we got to the hotel in aussie mum gave me 30 dollars and i said “ i’m off to go find a mall and explore through it’’ it took me 3 hours and i came back with …. to be continued
by temeka :]
The secret place in the wall
I’m
standing in a jail cell nowhere to go how will I get he thought to himself ,
but where could I go, wait he thought to himself the person that made this had
to get out of her but where he was tapping on the wall trying to see if there
was a hollo tap, tap, tap, tap, creak “ah” he said to himself he pushed it as
hard as he could “Ah” he said falling over from pushing that space “It moves”
“That’s how he got out” he followed the trail he could see light he walked
straight out of that place forgetting that ever happened.
By
Heath
Harmony
Once upon a time there was a little girl called ana she lived in a huge tower,she came across a prince and he told her she had to move away she then said but where could I go he replied with far far away she then ran away like a baby and cried she said to her self where am I going to stay she cried so hard as she came across a fairy the fairy said hello child my name is harmony I am here to grant you 3 wishes but this spell is very powerful u have to wish for things you actually need so ana thought well I need a house and I need food and money so the fairy said are you sure child and ana said yes wait I can't be alone so the fairy said instead of food I'll give u people to keep you company ana then said yes that would be lovely she then sleep and woke up the next day in a new home and people around her she loved it the end.
from maia
from maia
The Chase
I ran down the street in terror trying to get away from this rouge kitty. Never ever get on the neighbours bad side! The street was a blur of colour as my feet pounded on the pavement. Snarls of anger came roaring behind me. I had no idea what to do, but where could I go? Turning a corner I just happened to find an alleyway, which lead me away from the Cat monster thing. How cliché. I rushed down it hoping that the kitty would not get my scent, I was so wrong. All I could hear was the padding of its paws…
Anna
The dream
Its 9:00pm and I'm going to bed before I go to bed I give mum a hug and kiss. After fall asleep I wake up, it’s dark and cold. I start to walk forward, I can hear someone talking in the distance. First I look around to see if there is anybody else around but there is not, its as empty as a ghost town. I hear a gunshot then screaming after it, I start to back off and hide around the curve to see who’s coming. Its an army, they must of emptied this place before I got here then someone shoots me with a rifle then I wake up horrified.
By Jack
By Jack
The Big Game
In the changing room the nerves rush though my veins, I know we have to win this game as it is the final of the rugby world cup. We walk out on to the pitch every one is shouting GO ALL BLACKS!!!, As the game starts we get the ball and set up a ruck. England sored at 72mins they missed the conversion 5-0 at this point I thought we where going to lose.74 But I got the ball and ran I wanted to stay in the middle of the field but I had no where to go but the corner......... to be continued.
by Baydn
by Baydn
The dark room
I’m in a room a dark room with a door at the other end and get up and walk towards it. I go outside I don’t know where I am, I am in like a forest or something. Its bright green and has beautiful flowers everywhere and has bright blue butterfly's flying all around me its like magic but I am lost but where could I go. I just keep walking I feel like the forest will never end and i cant find my way back. I’m lost is this a dream get me out of here wake me up!
By Dana
Help
I saw some girl on the street corner just lying on the concrete. I cautiously walked over to her, she muttered "help me". I studied the girl more closely, she had cuts on her arms and legs, old scruffy clothes and a large bump on her head. The girl said "but where could i go" "what do you mean" I asked, no answer. I called an ambulance straight away as I thought she may have a concussion. When the ambulance arrived they didn't let me go with her. All I could think of was would she really be ok.
Tia
Tuesday, May 27, 2014
Where to go?
I'm saving up for a trip in the world but I don't know were to go. I'm thinking about going to Fiji were it is hot and tropical but i also want to go to Antarctica were it is cold and icy! There are so many places that I want to go to but I don't no were to go, I might just go to Australia we're it is cheaper and it is hot. And also I'd like to see a kangaroo and do all the theme parks. So I've decided to go to Australia.
From Harrison
From Harrison
The basement
My best friend was calling my name from downstairs in the basement. I thought to myself "why would she be there" I walked downstairs tentatively and looked at her. She looked at me and said that she was hungry so I turned to get some food from the kitchen, my hairs at the back of my neck started to prickle,I turned around only to see fangs starting to grow out of a mouth that was coming closer and closer towards me but where could I go I started running but it was to late. Then I turned into a vampire
moral never trust anyone
(just kidding:))
by Sarah.c
Monday, May 26, 2014
5 SC - week 4
This weeks 5 sentence should make you chuckle...... Think of 5 sentences about this picture - what might the girl of said/done??
100 wc week 4...
The prompt for this week is a simple one! It is:
…but where could I go…
Make sure you really think about your story and use your 100 words wisely. Make sure you visit other classes and leave some supportive comments.
Friday, May 23, 2014
5 Sentence Challenge - The Circus
The Circus
There are clowns.
There are heaps of tricks.
There are heaps of colours.
Circus are funny.
A lot of people are in the circus.
from Adam
Thursday, May 22, 2014
Dear World Leaders
Dear World Leaders
Most of us in the world get education and sometimes we take it for granted. We need to make a stand so everyone like Lucy can get it. It shouldn't matter where you live or how poor you are. If you live too far away from school or have a disability you need to do something to get children to school. In New Zealand lots of school children are doing 40 hour famine challenge. Fundraising could help people like Lucy and her challenges that stop her from getting to a school. If kids can help maybe you can do something to help as well.
From Kieron
Dear Government
Dear government,
I think that Lucy should go to school so
that she can grow up smart so that she can provide help for her friends and
family. A disability shouldn’t be
something to stop Lucy being able to
learn, it’s not like she’s not going to put it to good use, she would use it to
help people either give education to other children or help sick people in her
city, and i’m sure that if she became a teacher then she would make a system so
that kids that have disability’s like her can get to school and get a good
education.
Thank you.
Emily
Lucy
I think Lucy should go to school because she has a disability, she should get to go before people who don't. Its like here in NZ its not fair if I cant go to school because I cant walk properly.40 If she dose not go to school she wont know how to look after her self when she is older, then she will have to live with her mum forever. Its not fair if all Lucys friends go to school and she dose not because of a little disability. So I think Lucy should go to school and live the life of a normal kid.
by baydn.
Should Lucy go to school?
I think people like Lucy should go to school because they should be learning the same stuff as us like reading, math’s, writing, spelling and tech. They should also go to school because they need to make friends and study for when they go to university so they can get a good job. Also for when people like her grow up and they need to learn about keeping themselves safe for when they are walking around in the public. She also needs to have reading and math in her life so she knows how to count and read in her life.
From Jack
From Jack
Dear people of the world
Dear people of the
world
It’s a shame that
millions of people around the world do not get the same education opportunities
that we do. About 57 million people around the world do not go to school and
about half of them have disabilities, Lucy is one of these people. She has a
disability caused by polio. This has caused her right leg to stay permanently
bent. Even if she could go to school she would have to crawl there and back and
when she got to school they wouldn’t have the right facilities for her. So we
need to get together and put things right.
Yours sincerely
Zane
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