Thursday, August 22, 2013

The exquisite train


As the train goes through the tunnel.....
A remarkable sight goes past with its golden rail, silver lining, lavender scent and exquisite platinum windows with trophies sitting on each one.  But why would something so mesmerizing be stuck underground, why would the best train ever be riding on some rusty unstable track to be hidden from the world?  It comes to a slight glimpse of a small light, slowly growing bigger, and bigger... We’re through. There are people congratulating the best train revealing it. Stairs and a red carpet unravel and the prime ministers step out to show the price of a ride on the new train.
By jewel

The beast


Dun Dun Dun!
As the train entered the long, dark, scary tunnel everyone thought that everything was going to be alright but they thought wrong... Out of nowhere a massive hairy beast came out of the shadows and stood in the middle of the train tracks. The train driver slammed on the breaks, hoping but not hoping to hit the beast. Everyone was screaming thinking that they were going to get eaten alive. Then when they thought it couldn't get any worst, another massive hairy beast came out of the shadows, and stood next to the other one. This beast was slightly shorter than the other one. What was going to happen next?

By Nikita

Crash!


As the train entered the tunnel I could hear the sound of a long deep boom, I could tell it was a train. But its noise was distant It couldn’t be the train I was aboard. I peered out my window, further into to darkness to see a train heading our way. Its no use, the train can’t change tracks and its missed the turn. Next, all I remember is falling out of my seat as the trains franticly try to stop before the head on collision. I woke in a start, to see the two trains laying in pieces smoke rising and no one to help. 

By Brylee

Near miss..


As the train entered the tunnel the people were horrified.   They knew it would be a bad outcome.  There was no light at the other side of the tunnel. The train driver slammed on the brakes.  The wheels on the train squealed and sparks flew. The passengers ran up and down the train wildly like apes.  As they came closer to the end of the tunnel they started to slow down very fast, like there was glue on the tracks to stop the train. The train stopped just in time for it not to hit the end.  Then they had to warn the other trains that thought they would pass through.

By Keegan

Wednesday, August 21, 2013

As the train entered the tunnel....

I was listening to the sweet sound of children playing and then out of the blue someone yelled out "who turned out the lights?" I woke with a start only realizing that we were only going through a tunnel, I tried to go back to sleep, but I had this rotten feeling in my stomach as a wolf cried to the moon. Then I heard "baby blue jay, baby blue jay coming down to get you!" Then I felt a wet, slimy hand brush past my face I opened my eyes turned on the light and there it was a green goo with one eye and big gaping jaws…

By Hannah

The holiday


As the train entered the station, we hurried to the platform, only to find out that we were too late!
“I told you we should not have let HER set the alarm!”, bellowed my sister pointing at me. “ Yeah Emma”, said my dad in a grumpy sarcastic way. “We just missed our holiday!” .”Hey don’t all gang up on me”, I mumbled.. “Wait a minute”, my mum instructed. She pulled the tickets from her bag. “ Ammmm, we're kind of early”. “What?”, my dad replied. “Tuesday 27 of August”, he yelled. “That’s TWO weeks away!”.
“HA”, I shouted. “Come on, lets go”.

By Emma

The dream


As I went to bed that night I dreamt of a train speeding past me, with its big wheels and crankshaft trying to push its way through the dark night, and the faint noise of chugga chugga choo choo, the cold suddenly wind hits me. Then I follow it, I can’t resist chasing after it, as I leap up onto the train tracks, my feet thumping every time I land on a cross tie, the gentle wind on my face, I stop to catch my breath, my heart thumping. I look up as the train entered the tunnel. And I wake up…

By Jess

Magic, magic everywhere....


The train went through the tunnel and came out in pixie land with ferries and pink everywhere! Most people on the train were confused but I understand it. I figured that it was such a bad day before we went in the tunnel and with some magic it came out with ferries and pink all around. I thought it was really cool because walls were candy and the road was icing. Ever body was dancing and eating until the train driver said all aboard and we all got on. Then we saw a tunnel and said goodbye.    

By Tom

Train into tunnel


As the train went into the tunnel the driver blew the horn. Then all the little kids looked out the windows, all they can see is the train’s light’s beaming throw the dark, dusty tunnel. All the kids were listening to the sound of the hard metal wheels running along the train tracks. When the train was near the end of the tunnel the driver blew the horn twice to tell everyone. The light of day blinded everyone for a few seconds then they all looked out the windows to a field of flowers, sheep and cows.

By Ashleigh